Correct These Sentences

1. I went skating down at the pond and three kids from my school were there .We fell down again and again we laughed so much our stomachs hunt.
2. I though the lopsided game would never end. The score just kept getting worse and worse.
3. Martha think she is so cool she is not cool to me.
4. Joe watched a video that his mom had bought for him at the store where she worked .
5. Susan loved to watch football . She would watch it every Sunday on T.Vand every Saturday .She would go to the local college football game . She would always wear the school colors.

Angry Time

There was one time I was angry because I could not find my I.D . I had to go take the test all over again. The first time I didn't pass the test. So I had to go back to D.M.V and take the test again. The second time I want I didn't pass the test . So I said I am got my I.D out. So I stop being angry .

Sentence Combining

• The shelter burned.
• The flames rumbled.
• They rumbled like a freight train.
• They sucked at the air.

• I saw a shelter burning and it flames rumbled like a freght trainand it also sucked at the air.
• There was a shelter burned it had alots flames rumble they freight train and it also sucked up air.

Alaska

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Vivio red Northern light shine above pioneet peak in Palmer, Alaska

Really Scary Thing That I Seen

One today when I was a sleep with my parents. My grandmother came into the room and ask my dad if he was going to take the kids to school and my dad said he was going to take us later. So my dad ask my mom if she was going to get up . But my mother did not say thing .But my dad fet my mom.She was cold like ice. So my dad got up and turn on the light and look at my mother and she was already dead.

Cesar Cazares 4yearold Ester Estella Cazares 1yearold Emmanuel Cazares 3yearold

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Thankgiving

I spent alot of time with my kids and bofriend. I all so watch the Texas Longhorn play on t.v. I want to my boyfriend uncle house to to eat Thankgiving at his house. Then I want home to watch movies . I want to black Friday and I got movies for my kids. I also my boyfriend family came from San Jose , California. I want to library for the first time and got book with my kids. i want to my son school to meet with my son teacher she said my son is going to be a math student.

Sentence Combining

Janet directed the band . She also played the drums.
Janet played the drum and also directed the band.

Anthony is a fine writer. Jake is a fine writer.
Anthony and Jake are fine writer.

Maria is a fast reader. She just finished reading war and peace.
Maria was reading the book of war and peace and she read it so fast.

That girl is a whiz at math. she has calculator in her hand.
That girl with a calculator is a math whiz.

Thanksgiving Thankful List

• I am thankful for my kids
• Thankful for going back to school
• Thankful for having nice teachers to help
• Thankful for having lots of brothers and a sister

Writing Practice

• He wantched it.
• He ate it.
• She called it.
• She jumped it.
• They pulled it.
• They broke it.

Rene was watching NFL football. Rene eats chip and hot dog for dinner. Kimberly called cesar and ask him if he want to eat. Kimberly jumped over the rock. My family pulled the broken tree from my broken legs.My family broke the tree.

Favorite Place

My favorite is Austin ,Texas because that where all my family live there . It a big place to live at and it quiet .Every one does not now your bussines on what going on. I all so think it a good place to live with your family and chilren. Austin Texas has big building it has nice people and friendly people who talk to you .

Sentence

Lettuce all over the table.
Because the tornado was completely unexpected.
Try and get here on time.
Can I go with?
I should of studied for that test.
I haven't got no money.

Practice Formatting

1. The quick brown fox jumped over the lazy dog.
2. The quick brown fox jumped over the lazy dog.My name is Kimberly Ann Luna
3. Kimberly Ann Luna
4. Blogger com
5. 49ers

• Here is my pictures
• Here is another name for my self
• Austin Texas
• Texas Longhorns
• Cazares

Sentence Comthobining

• The dog followed Mary .
• It her for half a mile.
• She forced herself to stay calm.
• It stayed very close behind her.
• Dog followed Mary a about mile and forced herself to stay calm It stay very close to her.
• Mary saw a dog right behind herand it stay aadout a half a mile but she stay calm and the dog stay next to her.
• The dog saw Mary walking and it stay a mile behind her but the dog and mary stay calm togther.

Construction Rules

• Applicant must have valid and clean O.D.L must be able to operate all equipment safely.
• At least two years experience
• must have reliable transportion,be able to pass extensive back ground check
• Must be able to lift 50lbs
• Must have a SS
• Bi-lingual English/spanish
• Excellent communication skill
• Honest, Friendly,outstanding communication skill
• able to work with other towards ateam goal
• able to follow direction
• Dependable- can work without supervision
• Enjoy working with people
• able to work independently
• Drove vehicles to sites, dumps and other location as needed
• Clean up area by picking up supplies and put them away

Election

I think it a good idea to have a black president this year.My be he could change the world and stop the wars.I wonder why they didn't pass the bus routes. I think they should had change that because ever body uses them to go places.I hope he will help all students go to college . I think it a idea that the are given more people time in jail. I think obama will help us in what we need for are familys

Kimberly Luna , Ester Estella, Rene

This is my son Cesar Cazares he is four years old and he goes to school at fayer wright school. He is all so in headstarted. He said he like school and cartoon witch are batman and spiderman.

This is my son Emmanuel Angel Cazares. He is three years old and he likes spiderman .

This is my family

Special Time You Spent With Your Grandparents

There was one special time that I spent with my grandparents and that was for three years. When my mother pass away and my dad got lock up for five years.So I spent All my time with grandparents. I talk about thing with my grandmother like if she was my mother. My grandfather was like my dad .

Your Dream Car Or Vehichle

My dream truck is a Dodge F150 because I really like the style. It's big enough for me and my family. The color I want it to be is blue or red because those are my favorite colors. But my first truck that I got was an old truck from my uncle and that truck took me everywhere. I guess that was alright to have.

What's Your Favorite Thing To Watch On T.V.?

My favorite sport I like to watch is NFL. I watch it every weekend because my boyfriend and his family members watch it every weekend . The 49ers are the best team in the world.

Information About Colombia

Before I read the book, Out Of War I didn't now a lot about it . I think it a pretty good book because it has war for five year and how low class people .Many people in different country go throw the same thing as other. I felt so sorry because some had to move a round and had no money or food to live off of. So many gangs just like Salem or other places. But other then that it was a good book .

Peer Editing

Step 1-Compliments : Start was a positive and with a positive.

• I really loved your topic....
• My favorite part was because......
• I like the way you ....
• This was really fun to read because...
• I think you used alot of good details...
• I like when you used the words..

:step 2 -suggestions :Be Specific ( give details)

step 3-Corrections :

• Spelling Mistakes
• Grammer Mistakes
• Punctuation Mistakes
• Sentence Mistakes

Tell About A Timew When You Had To Dig Through Garbage To Find A Lost Object.

There been lots of time that I had to dig in the trash can. I dig for paper, toys, clothes, and other stuff that I put in there. There was one time I had to get to the bottom of the trash can because my son had thrown his toy in there and it went to the bottom of the trash. It was so nasty, dirty, and moldly. But at the end I found what my son was looking for and I would do everything for my son.

Evaluation Of Hannah In Between

First of all I think It a pretty goog story because it adout girl who is very scariest of her mother drinking and I think many people or kids go throw this problem with some one in there family.I pretty much like this book because it remind me of some of my family.The character are very interesting in the story it like it is really happening in life.Yes it could be set in a another time or place if it want to be .I think the auther wrote this book becuse to show who the parnets are in real life and the way the have drinking problem and who it scary for there kids to see them like that.

Stories Topices

.Write a narrative story about something you own(and Treasure) but other think is junk.
. Write a imaginative story about what happen when kids take over the school caferteria.
.Write story about what our would will be liked in the year 2050.How will you be living inthe new year .
. Make up a story that begins "It was the middle of the night and I suddenly Remembered..."
. A child who refuses to bathe .
.A cat who afraid of mice.
.A pig who is very neat and hates dirt.
. Think a several places you never want to go again.Then choose one and tell your feeling about it.
.Write narrative story about a ball game you played in that you'll always remember.
.Tell about a time when you had to dig throught garbage to find alost object.
.Special time you spent with your grandparents.
Eplain what stress does to your body.
.But it's all over now because .
.When I saw him for the first Time I want to.
.If you were the judge what would be the sentence for parents who beat thier children.
.If you caught you children drink and smoking what would you say to them .
.You have to stay in school until your 16 .do you think that a good idea .
.Perjury is the crime of lying in court do you think lying should be a crime.

Sentence Combining

Mama sat. She sat by the window. She wore black.
Mama sat By the window and she wore black.
She wore black and then mama sat by the window.
When mama sat on the bus she sat by the window and she was wearing black.
when mama sat on the bus by the window and was wearing black.
Mama was by the window while she was siting she was puting on her shirt that was black.
One day mama was on here way to take me to school as we got ready me and mama put a

School Blogger

I think is a good idea to set up a blogger because that way some one would now something about me because I am not from salem I'm from Texas . I really like this school because it meet my time in the morning ,it has really good people here to help me out try to get my GED and it really has happy teachers here to help me with my reading and even when I could not get into school my reading really try to help me out the teacher never stop help me out the understand were I'm am coming from.