Friday, October 24, 2008

Your Dream Car Or Vehichle


My dream truck is a Dodge F150 because I really like the style. It's big enough for me and my family. The color I want it to be is blue or red because those are my favorite colors. But my first truck that I got was an old truck from my uncle and that truck took me everywhere. I guess that was alright to have.

Wednesday, October 22, 2008

What's Your Favorite Thing To Watch On T.V.?


My favorite sport I like to watch is NFL. I watch it every weekend because my boyfriend and his family members watch it every weekend . The 49ers are the best team in the world.

Monday, October 20, 2008

Information About Colombia

Before I read the book, Out Of War I didn't now a lot about it . I think it a pretty good book because it has war for five year and how low class people .Many people in different country go throw the same thing as other. I felt so sorry because some had to move a round and had no money or food to live off of. So many gangs just like Salem or other places. But other then that it was a good book .

Thursday, October 16, 2008

Peer Editing

Step 1-Compliments : Start was a positive and with a positive.

  • I really loved your topic....
  • My favorite part was because......
  • I like the way you ....
  • This was really fun to read because...
  • I think you used alot of good details...
  • I like when you used the words..

:step 2 -suggestions :Be Specific ( give details)

step 3-Corrections :

  • Spelling Mistakes
  • Grammer Mistakes
  • Punctuation Mistakes
  • Sentence Mistakes

Wednesday, October 15, 2008

Tell About A Timew When You Had To Dig Through Garbage To Find A Lost Object.


There been lots of time that I had to dig in the trash can. I dig for paper, toys, clothes, and other stuff that I put in there. There was one time I had to get to the bottom of the trash can because my son had thrown his toy in there and it went to the bottom of the trash. It was so nasty, dirty, and moldly. But at the end I found what my son was looking for and I would do everything for my son.

Tuesday, October 14, 2008

Evaluation Of Hannah In Between

First of all I think It a pretty goog story because it adout girl who is very scariest of her mother drinking and I think many people or kids go throw this problem with some one in there family.I pretty much like this book because it remind me of some of my family.The character are very interesting in the story it like it is really happening in life.Yes it could be set in a another time or place if it want to be .I think the auther wrote this book becuse to show who the parnets are in real life and the way the have drinking problem and who it scary for there kids to see them like that.

Wednesday, October 8, 2008

Stories Topices

.Write a narrative story about something you own(and Treasure) but other think is junk.
. Write a imaginative story about what happen when kids take over the school caferteria.
.Write story about what our would will be liked in the year 2050.How will you be living inthe new year .
. Make up a story that begins "It was the middle of the night and I suddenly Remembered..."
. A child who refuses to bathe .
.A cat who afraid of mice.
.A pig who is very neat and hates dirt.
. Think a several places you never want to go again.Then choose one and tell your feeling about it.
.Write narrative story about a ball game you played in that you'll always remember.
.Tell about a time when you had to dig throught garbage to find alost object.
.Special time you spent with your grandparents.
Eplain what stress does to your body.
.But it's all over now because .
.When I saw him for the first Time I want to.
.If you were the judge what would be the sentence for parents who beat thier children.
.If you caught you children drink and smoking what would you say to them .
.You have to stay in school until your 16 .do you think that a good idea .
.Perjury is the crime of lying in court do you think lying should be a crime.

Monday, October 6, 2008

Sentence Combining

Mama sat. She sat by the window. She wore black.
Mama sat By the window and she wore black.
She wore black and then mama sat by the window.
When mama sat on the bus she sat by the window and she was wearing black.
when mama sat on the bus by the window and was wearing black.
Mama was by the window while she was siting she was puting on her shirt that was black.
One day mama was on here way to take me to school as we got ready me and mama put a

Thursday, October 2, 2008

School Blogger

I think is a good idea to set up a blogger because that way some one would now something about me because I am not from salem I'm from Texas . I really like this school because it meet my time in the morning ,it has really good people here to help me out try to get my GED and it really has happy teachers here to help me with my reading and even when I could not get into school my reading really try to help me out the teacher never stop help me out the understand were I'm am coming from.