Thursday, January 8, 2009

Sentence Combining

  • Cole struggled . He struggled to shift his position. The ground was uneven. stiffness had set into his joints like hardened cement.
  • Cole grimaced . Cole struggled to raise his right knee. Cole couldn't.
  • All of his life he had been haunted . He had been haunted with nightmares. The nightmares were of helplessness.
  • Cole struggled to shift his position and the ground was very uneven with a stiffness had set into his joint just like hardened cement.
  • Cole was grimaced and he was struggling to raise his right knee but he couldn't.
  • All Cole life he was haunted but he was haunted with nightmares and the nightmares were not so helplessness.

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